Thursday, 27 August 2015

Out - Original Song

You try to dismiss the things that they call you.
But I know that it angers you.

You're a walking time bomb, and you're having trouble letting off steam.
But lashing out is where you'd rather not be.

You have a very open family, but you can't tell them what you really think.
You can't put the pieces of the puzzle together, but I hope that one of them is me.

You're clawing at your skin, trying to get the feelings out.
You're stuck in a cage, and you're not let out.

So let's just try to get you out.
Out of your shell. Out of your fear.
I hope maybe I will help make things clear.

I wanna stay your friend but will you reject me,
when I try to help?
I want to stay around but will you forget me,
when I try to help?



1 comment:

  1. Still from files dated 2008. I'm struggling with the structure of this one a little, I looked at moving sections but it interfered with the (sketchy as it is) flow. If anything I could maybe move the last bit to after the 2nd or 3rd verse.

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